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a Dean-focused hurt/comfort comment meme (#4) 
30th-Jan-2011 10:53 am
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It’s that time again! ::dances::



A Dean-focused
h/c comment meme


SPREAD THE WORD!


A few ground-rules:

01. As for what type of thing you should be prompting here, this is a Dean-focused hurt/comfort community, so Dean should be the one in the hurt/comforted role. Your prompts may involve sick!Dean, (yes, please!) angsty!Dean, hurt!Dean, or anything else that results in Dean being on the receiving end of hurt/comfort.

02. Comment to this post with your desired characters or pairings, if any, and a prompt. All genres/pairings are welcome, however this is not an RPF meme. Please focus on the fictional characters only.

Example A: “Sam, Dean, gen, set in season 4. PTSD!Dean has a flashback to hell on a hunt and almost gets himself and Sam killed. Cue guilty, upset Dean and awesome, comforting Sam.”
Example B: “Sam/Dean, fever. Dean has the chills and there is cuddling, naaw.”

03. You can leave as many prompts as you like, but one prompt per comment, please. If you've got a few, comment with each separately.

04. Your prompts can be as short or as detailed as you’d like.

05. Scroll through the comments and when/if you find a prompt you like, write a fic in reply to the comment.

06. More than one comment-fic response to a prompt is totally acceptable, and in fact encouraged. The more fic, the better!

07. Art submissions are very much accepted too! Art larger than 800 px or so should be posted as a thumbnail that links back to the full art, please.

08. When replying to a prompt with your comment-fic or art, put 'FILLED' in your subject line as well as warning for anything that might be triggering, such as non-con, self-harm, etc. You can add anything else you want too, ie: a title if you have one/part numbers. So, your subject line should look something like this:

FILLED: Title, Character(s), genre/pairing(s), Rating, Warning(s) - if any

For further clarification:

Example: FILLED: Untitled, Dean and Sam, gen, PG-13, self-harm

It’s not a big deal if you don’t do all of this, but using 'FILLED' as well as warnings will make it easier for people to find your fic, and for me when I’m compiling the masterlist.

09. Anonymous posting is enabled in case you’re embarrassed by your schmoopiest of schmoopy hurt/comfort fantasies or something, haha. IP logging will also be off during the weeks the meme is at it’s most active.

10. No spoilers for upcoming episodes, please. If you're prompting something from a recently aired episode, please be courteous and note that there may be spoilers before you get to the main part of your request. Or you can use the following code. Just put your prompt/text where it says to:

CODE FOR SPOILERY PROMPTS/TEXT


It will look like this:

Lalalala SPOILER ALERT.


11. Likewise, no character bashing, or rudeness in general. Be respectful – of the characters, and of each other. The mod reserves the right to delete inappropriate comments.

12. Do feed your authors! They’re awesome.

13. If you want to advertise this, that’s fantastic! It would be really appreciated. Just copy and paste the code provided above into your journal.

Oh, and just a few things!

FAQ:

  • Yes, if your fic gets too long for a comment-fic, you can comment with the link to it at your LJ.

  • Yes, you can totally post the fics you write for this meme directly to the comm as well.

  • Because it bears repeating - yes, art is more than welcome as well as fic.

  • As for a timeframe - this post will be open for prompting between one and two weeks or so. There’s no exact timeline, because I play it by ear and don’t close it until I see it’s starting to slow down. In any case, it will stay open indefinitely for new comment-fics and comments/feedback.


Any other questions? Feel free to PM me, or e-mail hoodietime [at] gmail [dot] com.

HAVE FUN!

Masterlist


ETA: As of February 17th, 2011, this meme is closed for leaving new prompts. It is still OPEN, however, (and will be indefinitely) for new comment-fics and comments/feedback, and I’ll keep updating the masterlist as long as people keep writing. ;)


This post was compiled by maypoles and is posted under this account for organizational purposes.
Comments 
30th-Jan-2011 03:06 pm (UTC) - Asthmatic!Dean
Anonymous
Dean has been feeling short of breath for a few days. But he hides it from Sam, and goes hunting. Unfortunately, he has a severe asthma attack and ends up in the hospital.
30th-Jan-2011 03:22 pm (UTC) - Re: Asthmatic!Dean
I love writing asthma!dean so I'm going to have a bash at this
30th-Jan-2011 03:31 pm (UTC) - Re: Asthmatic!Dean
Anonymous
OP here, looking forward to the fill
30th-Jan-2011 05:24 pm (UTC) - Re: Asthmatic!Dean
I want to read this to, asthma Dean is love I was just going to write it as a request! Looking forward to reading what you come up with. :D
30th-Jan-2011 10:15 pm (UTC) - Re: Asthmatic!Dean
You've written asthma!Dean? Where, where?!?!
30th-Jan-2011 11:04 pm (UTC) - Re: Asthmatic!Dean
on my FF http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1400394/hobbleit

3 fics- breathe in the air, peer pressure and the air that you breathe
31st-Jan-2011 12:46 am (UTC) - Short of Breath part 1
Here it is. Hope you like it

The tight feeling in his chest just would not go away. The wheezing was becoming more and more noticeable but Dean still did his best to hide it from Sam. It wasn’t easy but he managed to convince Sam that nothing was wrong with him and insisted they found a new hunt to work on. Whilst Sam searched through the newspapers for a job, Dean attempted to make himself feel better. Problem was, nothing worked.

He would feel out of breath almost instantly and couldn’t run at all, he couldn’t even walk far before the tight chest started and the all too familiar feeling of being unable to breathe hit him. He simply dismissed it as irrelevant though, he’d had enough asthma attacks in his life and he knew how to handle them. However, he had no asthma medication so he had to be extra careful.

“Hey, I think I’ve found something.” Sam announced as Dean was sitting on his bed concentrating just on breathing. “Dean? Dean? Are you even listening?” Sam called out, bring Dean back to reality.

“Sorry?”

“Have you been listening to a word I’ve been saying?”

“Sorry, mind was somewhere else. What have you got?”

“Looks like a haunting,” Sam replied as he handed Dean the paper. Dean took a moment to read it.

“Let’s go,” he said to Sam as he grabbed his jacket and bag.

XXX

Dean was having trouble keeping up with Sam. His chest just kept feeling worse
so he made full use of the time Sam spent researching the haunting to rest up and feel better for the actual hunt. Unfortunately, he didn’t feel any better once the time came to the actual hunt.

As hunts went, it didn't turn out particularly well. The spirit in question was very volatile. Sam noticed very quickly that something wasn’t right with Dean but he was thrown across the cemetery by the spirit. He groaned in pain as he hit the ground with a resounding thud. Then the spirit turned towards Dean.

Dean didn’t have the time or the strength to react to the spirit as it attacked him. The force at which it threw him brought on a full blown asthma attack and there was nothing Dean could do.

Sam took the opportunity with the spirit being distracted with Dean to grab the lighter fluid and matches so he could dispose of the spirit before he hurried over to his brother.

“Christ Dean, why didn’t you tell me?” He said as he helped a gasping Dean to his feet. We need to get you to the hospital.”

Dean didn’t argue as he saw black spots swim in front of his eyes. It hurt so much, his chest felt as if someone was running his chest through a mangle. He could barely keep his eyes open. He felt himself starting to fall but Sam grabbed him and kept him standing upright.

“Come on, don’t pass out on me,” Sam encouraged as they reached the Impala. He opened the passenger door and deposited Dean inside the car before hurrying to the driver’s side. “It’s gonna be okay,” Sam reassured as he drove Dean to the hospital.
31st-Jan-2011 12:47 am (UTC) - Re: Short of Breath part 2
“You should have told me you were sick. I wouldn’t have suggested it if I’d known.”

“I’ve hunted before with a bad chest,” Dean replied, his voice croaky. He was tired and didn’t want to argue with Sam but he knew he couldn’t avoid it. He was stuck in a hospital bed and there was no running away.

“Just because dad would let you hunt when you weren’t up to it doesn’t mean that I’m going to be the same way. Where’s your inhaler?”
Dean shrugged. “No clue, lost it a while back.”

“Then you’ll have to get a new one and a spare one just in case,” Sam said back, his voice harsher than he intended. He softened his tone slightly before continuing. “You can’t jeopardise your health like this Dean. You need to rest when you’re sick otherwise you can’t help anyone. Tell me in future.”

“Okay,” Dean sighed, wanting to end this talk as quickly as possible. He felt like hell and he just wanted to sleep. “I won’t do anything so dumb again. Can I go to sleep now?”

“Fine, I’ll leave you to rest for a while but this isn’t over,” Sam told him although he knew it was. Dean wouldn’t bring this up again nor would he listen to Sam if he tried to mention it. He stood up from his seat, “I’m gonna go get some coffee. I’ll be back soon,” he told his brother before he left the room.

Dean sighed once his brother was out of hearing range. He felt miserable being stuck in here but he knew he had brought it on himself. He internally swore to himself that he wasn’t going to hunt again when he was sick. If only to keep Sam off his back.

He heard Sam return from the vending machines. “Dude, that coffee smells disgusting and I’m not even drinking any of it.”

“It tastes as bad as it smells,” Sam smiled back. “I might end up in the bed next to you. I think it may actually rot my stomach.”

Dean gave a small laugh before he broke out into a coughing fit, doubling over in the bed as he struggled for breath..

“You okay?” Sam asked nervously, worried for his brother.

“Yeah, I’m okay,” Dean gasped, regaining control of his breathing. “Just still feeling a little bit off.”

“Do you need to see a doctor?”

“No, I’ll be fine. Just give me a minute,” Dean slowed his breathing down until it was under control. He collapsed back against the pillow, several shades whiter than he had been before. “I am never hunting on a bad chest again, I swear to you. I never want to feel this crap again.”

“Good to know,” Sam smiled slightly, grimly satisfied that Dean was finally taking notice of what he had said. “’Cos if it happens again there’s no way I’m looking after your stubborn ass.”

“Thanks, way to show the brotherly love.”

Sam grinned at his brother’s mock hurt tone. “Now, seriously, get some rest,” he instructed.

“Fine, I'm resting,” Dean replied. “See I’ve got my eyes closed and everything.”

“I’ll see you later,” Sam told him and patted him gently on the shoulder.

“Sam...” Dean said hesitantly.

“Yeah?”

“Thanks,” Dean sighed before turning slightly so he was facing away from Sam. Sam knew it had taken a lot for his brother to say that.

“No problem,” Sam replied as he left his brother to rest.
31st-Jan-2011 01:06 am (UTC) - Re: Short of Breath part 2
OMG Asthma!Dean is LOVE!
31st-Jan-2011 01:52 am (UTC) - Re: Short of Breath part 2
Anonymous
OP here, protective!Sam is love. Thank you for writing this :-) Loved it.
31st-Jan-2011 06:32 am (UTC) - Re: Short of Breath part 2
Much love for this!
31st-Jan-2011 01:26 pm (UTC) - Re: Short of Breath part 2
YES!!!
1st-Feb-2011 07:32 am (UTC) - Re: Short of Breath part 2
Aww, the coffee scene. XD I love how brotherly they are in this!
1st-Feb-2011 08:16 pm (UTC) - Re: Short of Breath part 2
Anonymous
Awww. Hurt!Dean and protective!Sam. Best medicine ever.
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